Woohoo action! I loff action scenes. but why'd zaggy kill the rose? O_o *shrug* oh well.

La Jane? ...Err...? O_o
And, of course, it's one of those things that would never be possible in real life...
*blink*
...Jane?? ¬¬ If not... her... real name, then Adrienne, please.
But yeah. Coolness.

I think it's cool you had a dream with plot, even though it is a sad story. I like the level of detail you use with your writing.
Hope your dreams are happier,
Brittany