i love this story so much! Cant wait for the next chapter... and please dont be to long!-- Darkest Angels

ooh now something in the background could explode and then there could be this huge battle scene... blablabla... I'm a Matrix dork, don't mind me

-snicker- I was going 'Aw' all the way through. That was so cute! Hee. Great work. I couldn't stop grinning XD

heh, this is cute. I like how you made checking for scars cute and natural. The prequel might be a good idea if you can keep the same kind of feel to it, but otherwise I think it's fine on its own.