This is great...I miss your humorous song, but I guess, the angst stuff is inside of all of us. Keep on going...what's the rest of the happy stuff?

lol definitly! Clever and absolultely funny.

-write on!

ok im sorry if this sounds a little upset, but come on! a poem about pop ups? im sorry but ur topics r a little simplistic sometimes. its good for one of the humor poem thingys tho.

WAy too true, my fellow jerichoholic (that answer the question? and please dont move here, no offense or anything, but were way too crowded up here, what with our national igloo and all (idiot americans that know nothing, i luv it) about the poem, not bad, but at times "words from mouth your flow not good" (titus reference). not bad though, and thanks for the reviews. i'll try to do more but i'm busy.
The King of the Assclowns

hehehe i hate pop-ups! i love the blocker for it, i love this song too!

Interesting, but really interesting and when I say that I do not mean it in a bad way!

Lol, so true though. Nice poem.

I hate them all! Theres this one I remember getting. I could win an Ipod thingy if I can tell whos ass this is from the picture. WHY? I'm not even sure if I want an Ipod. I'm not really sure what it is...
PinkyCD

Amen to that! Preach on! _ lol. A true work of art. You should statr this as one of those e-mail forwards. People should really read this. Nice work!

Right on!lol. I can completely agree. Nice work. I like it a lot.

Haha, I understand how you feel.

I like it!

I HATE POPUP ADDS! hahahaha! seriously. who thinks of them? like the one where you hafta catch the monkey... hahaha. it's gay. you gotta watch out for those things! cuz they are all SCAMS! good use of rhyme, i think. lol. keep up the great work!
E. Hisifithith

hahaha wow that was soo amusing..and so true. I have pop-up blocker..yea, it doesn't work...this poem is just great..def a fave

nice.