wow, great job! this poem is very thoughtfully written. the vocabulary is very rich and there are a lot of really wonderful metaphors really add depth to the poem. well done!

Oh~ The name caught my eye, I once wrote something, like 2-4 lines long, about a Iron Mask...similar to this, I guess.
Once again, this is very good. You have a nice flow, no forced rhyming. Also, I can relate to it(Though, seeing what it's 'bout I'm not sure if that's a good thing -_- ...meh)
~Dream

AWESOME truly amazing u write well

DANG thats good. you comend MY work. I commend YOUR work. ITS AMAZING. i know exactly how it feels to live behind a mask. I've done it for so long.

I wrote a poem about a porcelain doll so I just had to read and I'm glad I did...I can relate very deeply...you're a good poet.

very nice, although the constant repetiton of sweet sorrow kinda was too much to it, but still its a very nice poem, good work
pili

This is good stuff. I like the calm simplicity of it. Most poetry about masks talks about pretending for the sake of someone you love. This one doesn't. I like it.

It is so true. I love this poem it is very beutiful. I often use the porclein mask as symbolism in my surrealist paintings and sketches.
The only problem I saw with was the word Alsasken

Very good poem. I like how you line directly about the porcelain mask several times throughout.

who has kissed you that was a suicidal angel..or wait I imagine that its...etaphorical...damn I was hoping you had been kissed or maybe ..oh well...nice poem..keep working at lil buddy! Mira

This poem really hit a nerve with me, probably because it reminds me of myself a couple years ago. Even with personal psychology aside, I think your descriptions and imagery are beautiful. I like how you keep repeating the "simple porcelain mask" bit. Great job.