REALLY good! oo0o0o0 it was a little creepy...sort of sent chills up your spine. great job! keep up the good work!~Froggie0~8)
Miss Wendy 2004-11-01 . chapter 1
Nice, I like this. I've read some of your blue soap opera stories (sorry, can't recall the name off the top of my head) and they're quite good, although this one seems to 'flow' a lot better.
greenishstar 2004-10-17 . chapter 1
You write really well. Its really creepy.Like Anthony Horowitz that kind of creepy, REALLy Good.