Who'd want to flame it? It's sweet!

To your mum: Wow... the poem actually floats! It's brilliant.

To you: You're so lucky to have such a gifted Mum, it's definitely passed to you!! (Heh.. my parents won't even consider writing anything creative in English. Much less a poem =P)

Oh yeah, and replying to the review you gave me (thankyou for it btw, and wow! you got to the very end o' my profile - I'm impressed), ew... fatty pieces of meat? I find them gross - I like my meat clean as a whistle. You know the bits at the end of drumsticks? I can't stand chewing on that...

Australia is awesome. The weather is great - mostly warm here in Sydney (still pretty warm in winter if you compare with other places) and I dunno, its great for its multiculturalism (most places today are like that though)- where do you live?

i like it! it has this weird eerie mist to it!

It was cute but a little bland. Then agian, I'm really hard to please. So in english, that would mean, GOOD JOB, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

Aw, your mom rights as beautifully as you!! You should try collaborating on something, that'd be like, ... doubley awesome!! But anyway, tell your mom I said job VERY well done, its very beautiful!!

salutations to your mum! good use of imagery. i was going to review one of your stories but i don't have the time today, im going to be busy, busy, busy. is your sister anoying, my brother is he on internet aswell because our computers are networked, and he's trying to download a game, and my internet is making his slower, and he keeps whinging. sorry about the acesive use of "and" in that last sentence, now prehaps you can see why i don't write stories! i mean i have the ideas, but writting them down? NO, i can't to it *celentia starts sobbing* but i supose i could, try to write one, a short one or something, but whenever i try to write short, i write long. wierd! but now i have to think of a story line...no maybe i'll think about it later.

lotsa luv celentia

beautifully descriptive... very visual and peaceful... i like it a lot ^_^kudos to your mom, and now ill read your stuff ^^

I dunno...its missing something, ah well its pretty good anyway.

Gaki please let your mom read this.Great poem it is nice and short but meaningful I like the line with the ancestral figures, very creative. it is easy to see where Gaki gets her amazing talent from.

Thanx for the review earlier; I'll put this poem in my favorites list.

review my sissy- Tipped. There's a link for her on my site. She's gonna review you now:
Tipped: Hi... wow you r one weird kiddo... THERE WITH YA BUDDY! haha. This is b-e-a-utiful! I love it. Veggie likes it too. Buh bye!
-Tipped

wow, when i read this poem it felt real to me. I could see t in my mind. Very Peaceful. Now i can see where you get your talent from.
Later Dayz
Be Safe
dark88poet

I'm glad you mom asked you to post it; it's excellent.

a very pretty poem! ha! love the styx. i think thats how you spell it. in one of my classes someone brought in their cd, and all the teachers came in and danced to mr. roboto. it was really funny.

well...you can tell your mom that i really liked it...it was very poetically beautiful and she did a great job...