Lovelove this. It's beautiful and vivid and just so amazing. Wonderfully written. The imagery is exquisitely dark.

horrifying & use of words.

-lin

That was intense and disturbing in a very beautiful way. You're such an amazing poet!

That was a truly horrifying image. Your piece left that disgusted&nauseous effect which you intended (I think) on me. Great job, I just love your works.

NO DON'T TAKE ME AWAY! Nah just kidding. Poor girl :( eep that was scary. (Did you write it during science class? :P)

Intenese and so sad, poor little girl.
Great job, Love it loadz
-Stally