You are a genius .. :) This is a bone chilling poem .. good as always ..

Excellent. It's a thriller! Get Michael Jackson to turn it into a song and do a music video!
Love me.
*Rach*

whoa.
that would make like a, great movie or something. like some kinda pychological thriller. awesomely chilling.

wow thats really depressing, but it fits together perfectly and has a very good rhythm! good job

Yeah..this is creepy. Well written though. A style all your own. Wonderful job. *checks favs box*
Hawke

A little creepy, but really good. It's sad too, expecially in the last lines. Very vivid and the part about the dolls staring at her is a nice touch. Good job.