 shadow-spirit 2004-07-08 . chapter 1horrably easy to do. and somthing regretted so soon afterwards. but the self hatred that comes after can b as adicticve as the ability to feel again 4 a while. not somthing id sugest geting into. still the poem is good, simple, not over complecated like the simple aparent black and white of the heat of the moment, also i like the balanced line 'opened mind/ closed legs' its almost a slogen and tehn teh 1 word finish 'lust' is punchy and relevent. theese actions cant b wraped up in a fuzzy blanket of 'love' its lust pure and simple and physical! |