interesting. this is the 1st inward looking poem i have read by u. its focus is diferent its a lot like an internal monologue or train of thought, its good that u can adapt diferent styles to diferent perspectives. the lines in this are longer and more expresive as well showing how each road links and wainds into the next with no full stops. also u list a lot (for security,love, passion, happiness) this is interesting and again portrays the numerious goles and choices u have. overpoweingly lonely at teh start, beautifly bleak especial with the paired lines (used and lonely/ loved and usefull/ scared adn alone) this really drives home the desolation but i like how u dont wallow in self pitty. there is a posative vibe that creeps in and a determination that is admirable. this is very well writen and exelently expressed (wow! long review! sorry - got a bit carried away!)

Nice piece, I really like, it's good. The last two lines wonderful. You're very good at writing poetry, keep up the good work.