I like this one Jackley. Sounds like me when I'm trying to write. Yay for insomniacs.

You may find inspiration during the night but I think you deserve your sleep.
In your poem you don't really make a point, you don't describe anything specifically, you just wrote words. To you they may make sense, but for me, they could be as well as a paragraph form, it would change the meaning, and I think that it should. Some things you can't just write in a poematic standard.
I adored this line : "As stars provide ecstasy and not" just because I think it is so true. Sometimes I lack my sleep but it never is boring during the night. And I love staring at the stars and what you said is true - they are very inspirational.