Reviews for The Apprentice: FINISHED!

Reviews For: The Apprentice: FINISHED! - Reviews: Page 1 of 11

Cesa-Duncan 2008-04-06 ch 27,	abuseAH! :] Wow Railee- that's really all I can say. blushes I read the whole book in a day- I didn't get much done today, but it was worth it. laughs evilly I can't wait to read your other books! ^_~ I think I might have to pace myself better though. I love your characters and how you keep it so nice and neat. There isn't LOTS of plot, but I LOVE it- I love the characters. I wish and hope that I can try and develop my characters like you have. runs off to bed TTYL- Chelsea
Rome's Daughter 2008-03-26 ch 15,	abuseShe's so stubborn! Ha, ha! I hope she sees the light soon...
Rome's Daughter 2008-03-26 ch 5,	abuseSweetness! I love it!! I can't help but notice some of the similarities between this and Pirates of the Carribean. Good similarity. I like it lots! Despite the wonderful characters of Will and Elizabeth, I must say Ben is my favourite. I do have a brother named that... Also he's a Son!! I love this period in history and I'm so glad you took it up. Did you say there was a sequel? I'll finish this up quick and them move on. You did a GREAT job on this! Your descriptions on the characters are superb! I can totally see them. Ha, ha, I love the fights! ~Jena Grant
TuttiFruttiOXOX 2008-03-12 ch 1,	abuseMmkay. I'm kind of in a rush right now so I can't quite ... leave a great review because honestly, I didn't read the first chapter. But it looks amazing. EEP. Okay, so I really want to read it, and I'm going to attempt a nice, well-rounded review when A) I have time and B) when I get home or to the library or wherever I shall be this afternoon. Like I said, looks great. Kat
Genato 2007-12-03 ch 27,	abuseWHY? THE ENDING SUCKS. but i know theres a sequel.. but it's so... urgh. but i love it. lolz. the fic's really good and although its kinda cliche.. it's still good. urgh. im being redundant. just keep on updating the next sequel.. is it finished or not? anyways. thanks for the fantastic read!
bluestickie 2007-11-25 ch 3,	abuseI must say that despite Elizabeth's initial dislike of Will making her into a bit of a - well, a **, I do really like her. And I can just picture her face in my mind, smiling as she anticipated Will's reaction to missing his ship.
bluestickie 2007-11-25 ch 1,	abuseIntriguing first chapter, I must say. I think I like Will's character - a bit brass, but not overly so. And his interaction with the ladies on the docks was rather amusing. I'm looking forward to reading the rest!
ANGEL992210 2007-03-09 ch 1,	abuseAMAZING JOB.
lool 2006-11-16 ch 18,	abuseyay!
obsession93 2006-04-29 ch 2,	abusethis is a really good story. you're an excellent writer
faye14 2006-04-18 ch 27, anon.	abuseWOW this is the BEST [no joke] BOOK EVER! It drove me insaine so I had to read it all! on to the next book!Jessica
veelagirl192 2006-03-17 ch 27,	abuseRAILEE YOU SLY SLY GIRL YOU! Don't you know it's against the Authers code of honor to end a story like this! It's unbaribly sad and, I feel so depressed! How could Will leave? I am shaking with anger at this moment! You are lucky your not in the same room as me or I would- wait I can I live in the same house as you! HERE I COME! Monkey p.s. you better be scared!
veelagirl192 2006-03-15 ch 2,	abusehe he he little Will and Elizabeth. lol I love ever little detail.
veelagirl192 2006-03-15 ch 1,	abuseI love your stroy! I think it's the best stroy I've ever read on fiction press and I am dead serious!
obsession93 2006-03-03 ch 1,	abusewow, this is really great. I'd read more right now, but my sister wants to get on.

Return to Top