|Reviews for The Apprentice: FINISHED!|
| Woodstock1330 2/16/05 . chapter 1
o! so good! i love it! Will is so cool. And your writing skills are excellent. .(i read yur profile, im a mormon as well! i just saw 'the work and the glory'! it's good!)
| Momo 2/9/05 . chapter 27
THAT IS SO AWSOME!
Railee u rock. seriously this is one of the best books i have EVER read.
see ya tomarrow
| aims80 2/3/05 . chapter 27
I didn't realise, until just now, this was a predecessor to johnny. :) (I'm not quick am I?) Anyways, loved it and like I said I am also enjoying Johnny, so keep up the good work. :) I love it when I come across a story on here that I get engrossed in so thanks for that!
| Global Nomad 1/27/05 . chapter 27
wowie! i wasn't able to read through that chapter very throughouly but that was good. no i understnad why you started a sequel so soon. you ended it well though i liked it. you could have drawn out the final thoughts a nit more though because it was rushed and then she thought something and boom it's the end. slow the end down a bit okay? great job and hopefull i'll be able to read the sequel sometime.
| unfeminine wiles 1/4/05 . chapter 27
oh wow...i'm speechless. you're an amazing writer and i finished this whole story in one night. i'm going to start reading the sequel now. amazing. wow...
| emilyclaire 12/13/04 . chapter 27
A really great story, and I liked the ending, even though it was annoying, it was unconventional so it makes your story stand out. Your character developement is also awesome - the characters are believable and their decisions make sense. Great work and I'm off to "When Johnny Comes Marching Home" -ec-
| emilyclaire 12/12/04 . chapter 23
Another few great chapters! I'm so anxious to finish this story so I can move onto the sequel!
| Great-Enchantress 12/10/04 . chapter 27
Wonderful story! I have only found your beautiful story a few days ago and I enjoyed it very much. I am looking forward to reading the second part, and I have no doubt it will be as good as the first. I really liked how you made Will and Ben run away to the war. The notes were a sweet touch, and I am sorry to say this, but Elizabeth deserves Will to leave her...now. Perhaps in the upcoming story she will grow up and learn that not everything in life is based on a pretty face and stature. I loved your story, and am looking forward to the next installment. :)
| passion101 12/6/04 . chapter 27
OMG! He can't die, that would be just so horrible!
| emilyclaire 12/5/04 . chapter 8
Truly a lovely story and worthy of the title "book." I know I'm not near finished yet, but I'm working on it and anxious to see how it turns out, Characterization is great and I love how you tie in scenes together, excellent work and you'll be hearing from me soon!-ec-
| MrFlames 12/5/04 . chapter 1
The "Sons of Liberty" is kinda a cliche phrase; however, not an inherently bad one. Your dialogue's a little choppy, too. Will, as a character, does not suck though, so good job.
| Nikki 12/5/04 . chapter 27
Oh, i bet i know whats kinda maybe gonaa happen in the sequel to this! But i bet it will be just as good anyhow. Well now i can say please post your new story soon, it bet it will be exciting!
| Nyssa Damaskinos 12/5/04 . chapter 27
I LOVE IT! I can't wait until the next book! I really wanna know what happens next! Please start it asap! I wanna see will fight some battles, maybe even serve under General Washington! I can't wait!
| Nyssa Damaskinos 12/5/04 . chapter 26
Hey! I love your story so far! I can't believe Will and Elizabeth haven't even admitted their feelings for each other yet! Why! I haven't read the next chapter yet! I hope it's as good.
I don't take what you say rudely in the chapter. I am a Catholic, born and raised, so I have no problem at all with Christianity. All I was saying was that Ben Franklin did believe in God, why wouldn't he? Just a non-interventionist God. He was a Diest, I think. You can read it in his Autobiography. I found a summary pointing it out.
| faig 12/4/04 . chapter 27
that was gorgeous! cant wait for the next!