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| White is a Sin 2006-02-10 ch 1, | abuseit makes me more excited and wanting to laugh! why do you make me laugh i think i'm doing it again THE VOICES TELL ME TO LAUGH! hehehehehehehheeheheehhe |
| TheatricalHorror 2006-02-01 ch 1, | abuseOH Very beautiful! I like this one, it is really good! Keep up the good job! |
| Snowed-Under 2005-01-07 ch 1, | abuseOMG! Cat! I can't believe I didn't review this! It rocks! It makes me peaceful too. Wonderful job. ^-^ |
| Belle-ness 2004-07-06 ch 1, | abuseInitially, thank you for your review of my Haikus. It was greatly appreciated. Secondly, this is great, I even felt peaceful whilst reading it. The words and phrases you have used create a peaceful atmosphere perfectly. In the summary of this poem you said you thought that this was a Haiku. As far as I am aware, though please correct me if I'm wrong, a Haiku is a poem with three lines. The first containing five syllables (sp?), the second containing seven and the last containing five. As I say, I'm not one hundred percent certain but that's what I have always thought. IrresistablePoison |