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Reviews For: Now You're Gone
camma 2006-02-10 . chapter 1
aww soo cute emi-poo neva knew u had it in u
x3 camille 2005-12-02 . chapter 1
since when do u kno about love and losing love??!! is there somethin ur not telln me missy ?! lol or have u just observed me and the idiots i've been with ? lol .. wolfy .. lol ..hahaha

anyways- it was mad ** .. keep up the good worky wolfy my dear ! muahahaha

Eirien 2005-11-30 . chapter 1
Well written, you can express so much in short poems, giving concrete little details and making them meaningful by their context and implied connections to emotions. Like the red rose and the chocolates symbolizing the speaker's love versus the tissue box etc. signifying the loss. Especially the image in the last line is really good.
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