Reviews for Kaleidoscopic Vision

vintage fade 2004-09-17 ch 1,	abuseI love the part 'Little girl Jumps from rooftops And take no notice below People below Scurry around like ants And take no notice above' Definitely a good poem, no matter what you seem to say. I enjoyed it, so good job! much love vintage fade
justaforgottenface37 2004-07-07 ch 1,	abuseNow that's good writing. i love the way you wrote it, and it almost makes me feel bleak... favorites list
b-U-b-TRUE 2004-07-05 ch 1,	abuseNeat. Very original..wonderful imagery. Keep it up!
Gleechumber 2004-07-05 ch 1,	abuseThis is a well written piece. Nice structure, and I especially like the ending.