|Reviews for Branded Badass|
| Tsukinani 12/15/04 . chapter 21
Awesome! Update soon ne?
We Could Be Gone
| SilverMoonlitPath 12/15/04 . chapter 21
darns... your birthday present was a day late for me... but hey, happy birthday... and nice chapter too... is jay gona kiss her? hope so... and hope that they dont get caught... smirks... so yeha... up-date soon please.
| BetterOffAsLovers 12/15/04 . chapter 21
This story is the best! i love Vee and i love Jay and theyre both so stubborn, theyre perfect for one another, please update!
| Romantic101 12/15/04 . chapter 21
oh my god, he's going to kiss her i know it. thank god, now there's going to be some lip lock action going on between the two love birds. ok well maybe i'm a little bit to excited! Speaking of excited-
HAPPY BIRTHDAY! *throws cake at you* lol
ok well i loved this chapter and i cant wait for another one to come!
| Layla 12/15/04 . chapter 20
GOD YOU TAKE FOREVER TO UPDATE! UPDATE I"M GOING CRAZY!
| Jayme 12/11/04 . chapter 20
Luv it Luv it Luv itUpdate! Update!
| kilala 12/10/04 . chapter 20
Hey, I like this chapter although there is nothing much to it. SO what's gonna happen next, need Ideas, I'm here to help. How about she recalls all that happened earlier like you had her doing, her getting punched in the the face and her fist hitting the locker (she missed) or something like that. But she also has to knee him else it wouldn't be fear and then take her binder and whack him upside the head. Lol. Ok then she is in the office b/c a security guard saw the guy who made a grab at her first and saw all of it happen. She was then sent to class with a pass after she made a statement on what took place and they didn't hold her resposible. After class, she quickly packs up to leave before Jay notices and he stops her. She turns when he calls her name and he sees her swollen sheeck. Wincing he walks up to her and turns her to face him asking her what happened. She of course shrugs him off and tells him it's none of his business. He then tells her it's his class that she was late to and he has every right to ask. And she's all like," oh just how you ran to the principle and told him that I come in late and shit," And then that story comes out where he is like I never told him anything I was called down there and saw you, I thought I was going to get fired. She's like whatever and turns away to walk to the door,"I have a ten minute break before I have to return to your class for detention." With her hand on the door he pushes in the little button to lock the door so that no one on the outside can enter, and says," no wait." Turning her around he ... Just a suggestion you can see I got carried away. Oh and the secretary is going to take it up on herself to stop by to see Jay, and it's gonna break up the kissing scene, but they're not going to make a sound and the hoe is gonna keep on calling and calling out for Jay until she leaves thinkng he's somewhere else. When they think she's gone they're gonna burst out laughing. Just another suggestion added on to my suggestion earlier. Do what you may good luck and keep writing this story.
| random 12/10/04 . chapter 20
you can always have her start to beat the shit of the guy or verbal attack works and you have Jay come along and get behind her and get the guy suspended or something. just an idea.
| Arika Blake 12/9/04 . chapter 20
* growls * UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE ... UPDATE
| Berzerk108 12/8/04 . chapter 20
Keep it coming! Can't wait to see how she kicks the jock's ass.
| SilverMoonlitPath 12/8/04 . chapter 20
O-mi-gosh... im in love with you story and cant wait for you to up-date it... oh and up Jay had a nice wet dream there...
| StrangeInfatuation 12/8/04 . chapter 20
whe. i am addicted to this . I would say have something
a. happen to Jay
b. Happen to Vee
c. Nothing happen to either of them and the story turn out happily ever after. that would suck cause its not long enough yet
d. something not listed above
| Megliz716 12/8/04 . chapter 20
So this was what happened that caused her to be late to Jay's class right? Well good chapter, I can't wait for more! As for ideas...the next chapter is going to be Jay and Vee talking right? Well I guess you should just go from there. I don't know; I don't write, I just read, but I'm sure it'll be great whatever you do!
| Loreille 12/8/04 . chapter 20
I think Vee should accidently kill the guy! Aw man i have the best ideas! You can thank me later !
| AppLEaves 12/8/04 . chapter 20
Ideas?...Uh...What about...um...have Jay come in while Vee's fighting with Matt. He protects her like a 'noble' gentleman. Note the sarcasm there. Anyway, THEY HAVE TO SLEEP WITH EACH OTHER. Vee and Jay of course.