|Reviews for Your photograph|
| Noel17 7/27/04 . chapter 1
this would make a great hit.
| AmethystTrish 7/8/04 . chapter 1
i can so totally relate. awesome song! i especially like how the mind goes back and forth, wanting to get over them, but not at the same time. again, wonderful job!
| To Venus and Back 7/5/04 . chapter 1
Oh, wow. This is almost like a professional song. You should consider actually making this into a song. I'd love to hear it! Very touching, pretty song. Great work!
| marshbar960 7/5/04 . chapter 1
aw...this is very expressive and yet kind of depression. but i can tell that you really love this guy and guess what? i can also relate.
anyway, i loved the repitition, word cohices, rhyming and metaphors that you used to create your overall mood. i especially loved the lines:
"I would drown in a lake of fire
You're the one that can take me higher
And I still love you
Because you're my desire"
also the lines:
"Your name is tatoo'ed across my heart,
Forever etched in place".
Very magnificently done! Thanks for sharing and keep writing!
| lisaslife 7/5/04 . chapter 1
Im not really a song writer, but to me this seems great. I can identify with it and the chorus is filled with feeling. Good Job!