Oh my God!
I really loved this!
It's so deep!
I feel what your saying here.
I particularly liked the ending.
"If loving you condemns me, let me burn in Hell."
So powerful...yet, so poetic...
P.S. Could you review my story? 'Can I Panic Now?'

You go get your man, girlfriend! :D That was a good piece of work, are you going to continue this? It'd make a fantastic story. Good luck anyway,
CC,
Princess of Pain

I'm proud of your decision, though. I'm just sorry that I can't relate--I don't know what it is to feel safe in a man's--or boy's--arms. Despite all your wishes and the pain you must feel, be thankful that you have felt it, no matter what the outcome of how you deal with this.

Wow. That was .. amazing. Wow... you are really talented.
~WMD~