hey again, thats a really mean place to leave it but i suppose it keeps people waiting for the next chapter if you upload it :D but still a fantastic story keep at it!

hey again, aw poor kortegas i feel really sorry for him, can't you at least one main character have a happy beginning?? oh well its still a really great story keep at it!

hey, this is a really cool opening to the story but you still have the death of alot of people, but oh well, keep at it :D

Hmm - the same problems I found in 'Fallen Angel' (or somewhat the same; you've gotten better, at the very least). You need to work on punctuation, especially in your quotations. You have descriptions in your chapters - yay ^^.

I'll come back to review/criticize properly.

- Chace

hmm. interesting flashbacks. they provide much-needed background information. update soon.

nice job. I've read alot of really good space battles, and this is in the same league. great job.

Wowwie! That is one heck of a way to open a story, lets just say hook, line, and sinker, and I am the poor fish on the end of this. If you do not post some more onto this story, I'll go crazy! Also, it may be helpful for you when your trying to give a author's note, to use A/N. People won't mistake it for a part of the story and give you a flammie over it. Just a tip.