Interesting.

OH NO

I just realised if you haven't updated in 3 years, it probably means you won't update any time soon, either.

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PLEASE D: upon reading this review...please, pretty, pretty pleassee? write another chapter? for me? please? for the girl who shares the same name as the protagonist? please?

i swear. isn't Rita italian? i mean, now that i think about it, it DOES sound quite India, but I also know for a fact that it originates from "Margarita" - which is Italian, but the name "Margarita" actually originates from Spain. So technically, Margarita is Spanish and Indian. But I DO remember something about hebrew?

Hahaha...update? :3

NO! I'm getting mixed up between ALEXANDER and LEX D: D:

I'm sorry, I must be bothering you with reviews from a story you wrote 3 years ago. But I feel the ned to ):

But I'm not indian ): which makes me sad, cos, you know - TWINSEYSS YEAH

No, I'm Asian. Not Indian.

And I live in Australia. Not U.S.

):

This makes me sad - sniffle -

WHY CAN'T MY LIFE/NAME/PERSON BE THE SAME AS RITA GILL'S?

Hahaha, it's a great story (:

OHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGOD I LOVE YOU DJFLKASJDF;LAKJDSFADF

never mind why ;D

um. this is also a pretty good story.

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okay, never mind about stalkers. MY NAME IS RITA TO 8D

so that explains my excitement, because i don't know any other person with the same name as me. but whatevs. RITA :) WOOHOO

Rita and Lex centric is good (: very good -nods-

best wishes on continuing the story

this is certainly interesting :)

i like it!

update soon!

Hey!Complete the story please.I'm an Indian it's been a change reading about us ..

AH WHY HAS THIS NOT BEEN UPDATED? THREE YEARS WOMAN! THREE! *virtually sticks 3 fingers in face* YOU MUST UPDATE!

...please? :D

This is so good! PLEASE update soon! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness!

-Bubbly Girl

By the way... You should check out

it's a great story!

Great! Absolutely wonderful, i love it! That is some seriously original shit...

Umm... random comments:

The Tash/'Xander' rape thing... tad creepy, but important.

About the Kashmir thing, have you watched Fanaa starring Aamir Khan?

I'm an Indian (moved to Aus when i was 6) and I think India's modernized now...

Yes a B is 'bad' and arranged marriages are the norm, but women have a say!

I know Rita likes Lex... so why is she perving on Alexander and Raven?

Thanks so much AND UPDATE SOON!

please please please update! D:

I'm about ready to DIE if you don't update soon.

This is one of the best stories ever! I don't know exactely why... but I'm really into this story and can't wait for the next chapter!

this is really good but also really disturbing at the same time (the whole Alexander thing)