this made me think of skittles... This poem is kinda short, and usually i like longer ones but this one seems to do it for me.

nice work ! i liked the way u start off with something similar to the end. i liked it
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Yes this is sweet! Nice read.
Jac x
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Hi! This is sweet. Keep writing
**WG