A rather nice way to end such a good story. I was hoping that he wouldn't commit suicide. Do you by any chance have a romantic story in the works about Riccidari Olcotti? I really like his character, and would really like to see him again!
Anyways, I eagerly await your next fic!
DarkSorceress

How could the king do that? poor Riccirdari! I love it! Simply Brilliant! please continue!

So he didnt get killed...Interesting twist. I had a feeling that if he didnt die, he would be dismissed from the Daelic order. Maybe now he can go back home and get married...Anyways, I hope you do update this again.
DarkSorceress

Fast paced chapter; but if you were to have slowed it down, i suspect that it may have been extremely boring. All in all, very well done. I sincerely hope that this wont be the last chapter; and I am happy that I figured out the prophecy before you revealed it. Anyways, I eagerly anticipate your next update; which I hope will be soon!
DarkSorceress

See, Riccidari did throw his life away for a girl! Oh great! Now he get killed! Well, I guess I never know...Typically your stories arent soo short...OH well, Id better stop guessing. Cant wait for more.

When they said throw away his knighthood for a girl, were they talking about him throwiing it away to save Veritila? I am really leaning on that one now.
DarkSorceress

Oh great,...cant Riccidari take common sense when it is given to him? I know he wants to save his sister, but still...
Cant wait for your next update,
DarkSorceress

I wonder if that is the girl in the prophecy...regardless of whether she is or not, I like her; and I hardly ever like female characters. I hope that Verlita is okay, and that Werkir doesnt kill her...maybe Riccidari's lover will save her...
Update Soon!

this is so brilliant! please keep going!

How dare he go for Riccidari's sister! Werkir's sorcery abilities seem to be pretty cool, and I wonder how this will turn out.
DarkSorceress

Argh! You must update! I like that whole idea of the Larkorm Plain, and the way that you described it at the beginning of that chapter. It was all very interesting!
I am itching to know how Riccidari will uncover the plot and put Werkir to justice.
Update Soon
DarkSorceress

Another interesting chapter. I really like Riccidari's character, and I cant wait to see what will happen next. Anyways, update soon!
DarkSorceress

Very fast paced chapter, but I know that there was a reason for the pace. Truthfully alot better than spending three thousand words droning on about the family's history.
It feels like just yesterday when you had started a story. Wait...it was yesterday!(jkjk).
Interesting start to what I am sure will be an interesting story. I suspect that you will update tommorow, and I will be sure to check foryour update.
DarkSorceress

Seems like there's a great plot. Write more soon!