 Mormon Princess 1 2004-08-04 . chapter 1Nicely written and well I love it! |
 Saiai 2004-07-30 . chapter 1Lovely detail! |
 Nethene Khthon 2004-07-13 . chapter 1Lovely serene imagery you evoke with this piece. I particularly enjoy the ending: You show the age, pride, and strength of your glimmering dragon with two lines. |
 Taka and Keichirou 2004-07-12 . chapter 1wow..great imagery...
keep it up...
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 nightdragon0 2004-07-10 . chapter 1Very nice dragon description. I've seen lots and every one is sorta unique in its own way. |
 Lord Calrith of Atredies 2004-07-09 . chapter 1A very nice piece of writing, you capture your words very well. |
 RNL 2004-07-08 . chapter 1 wow... |
 artemis astralstar 2004-07-06 . chapter 1 Beautiful. *opens hypothetical doors* welcome to fantasy, please make yourself at home and write some more! |