 Amanda 2005-11-02 . chapter 1 Wow,I desperately wish I could stand on my head. Spare, clean ... I like this, it's minimalist. |
 Weird Wings 2004-07-08 . chapter 1Left Wing: "I hate to say this but I can see Right Wing and me doing that!"
Right Wing: "I'm seeing red dots... is that a side effect?"
She actually did it. |
 Lady Saleci Loramma 2004-07-06 . chapter 1Very witty if I don't say so myself. I like the last three lines. -LSL, moone |
 PheonixSlayer 2004-07-06 . chapter 1short but sweet. interesting view, literally and figuratively |
 CW-nerd-12 2004-07-06 . chapter 1Hey, this is pretty cute! I've never read a poem about standing on your head before! I like this! keep writin'! |