What a beautiful image. It seems so simple, yet it's equally as meaningful. Oh, and I must say, I loved your thoughts about the moon in your profile. I also love the moon, but never thought about it from that perspective. Anyway, great work :)
*cosmo-queen*

This is a very beautifull poem,I can almost picture it.
P.S I love your quotes,especially why is the rum gone.
P.S.S I hope my e-mail will clear things up about me a little because its all true,scouts honor,and I really am a scout.

A great metaphor about life as well as about sanowflakes!! I don't really get the last line, it doesn't seem to really fit but you're the poet. Keep up the good work. -LSL