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Reviews For: A Dream No, a Nightmare
cosmo-queen 2004-07-19 . chapter 1
Good poem. You conveyed the emotions experienced with nightmares well. I particularly liked the line "In a frightening dream, I feared I would never wake up". It's simple, but ever so true!
*cosmo-queen*
Lady Saleci Loramma 2004-07-06 . chapter 1
Wow, the imagery is really powerful. It has good flow and the wording is very interesting. You convey the emotion so well to your reader. Keep writing. -LSL
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