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| FireKitty 2004-09-26 ch 1,  | abuseI'm finally reading your stories, hurrah! XP It seems very interesting..you should continue it. Only one chapter, tsk tsk... And here's some typos I found, lol. 9th paragraph: "She was probably an Outer to..." you did it again, it should be "too." Might want to fix that =P And then the "'Thank.,' the girl started to say" part..."Thank?" forgot the s, added a period, heh. |
| milessa 2004-07-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseooh, this one is nifty too. |