I like! Very cool. I cringed at the monotony while reading and hoped my life would become more exciting once I left school, but I'm doubting it, lol. I'm determined to make my life more spontaneous! I love the chorus by the way. Anyways, great work!
Later
FrEaK

Oh yeah! I see why you have so many reviews on this one... it kicks ass. Very well written. I liked the ass kissing part, by the way... I just thought you should know that, haha ;D

What a great song, i know exactly how ya feel. hope to hear it on a CD someday!

freedom... welps sometimes self-freedom is a pain too.

Great work, i like the last stanza alot.
Thanks for the review, keep writing.
S.O.S

all of your songs are really great.
your irish lover

I love all your writing! it's great. I'm hoping someday that i can be as good as you, and i have noticed, that a lot of your stuff is based on waiting for tomorrow to come, or waiting for a change in your life.

Very awesome. I think a lot of people can relate to it. As always, I really enjoyed reading this one. Although, I must say, this is definitely your most down-to-earth poem yet. Splendid work!
Magz.

heh heh. yeah. this is great... and true beyond words... agh. everything being the same... boring... OH THE MONOTANY! anyways, this was true... KEEP IT UP!
E. hisifithith

i liked this. very well expressed and all. keep up the writing

very good. nice rhyme. very clever. i like it. keep it up.

That was cool song...I feel the same way, life is just too typical these days and these are suppose to be the best years of our lives? I think not. Nice use of rhyme!

its kinda weird how those lyrics relate to me...and im guessing youre a punk/ska fan...again me figuring out tunes in my head...liked it, but maybe rethink the word mooch in a song?