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gerigirl 2007-06-29 . chapter 5
tellme your are going to have a part I to this story you left the readers with a big cliffhanger and i personally want to know what happens to Persephone.
Silver Daratraz 2005-05-31 . chapter 5
Just what happened? I really would like to know. Will you tell me or will you write. Looks like he was taken by Lucien or someone. Was it Lucien or was it someone else. Really. Please please please write here or write me.
Trickster Kitsune 2005-01-01 . chapter 5
O_O... --points-- Cliffhanger! At least for me... ^_^; I can't wait to see what happens next... o_o... Please update soon! ^^

And as for the question a few chapters back... I want to see Persephone and Demetrius together! They are so cute together... ^^
subtleline 2004-11-08 . chapter 5
I am confused but happy.Not a very common feeling, but hey who cares. First, THANK YOU for the halloween card. It was so nice of u and I LUVED the pic. So nice.*huggles* As for the confusion, u kno where that's from but still, I can wait for more to b revealed. *pouts* And I can't decide who I want Persephone to b with.! It's kinda frustrating I tell u!! But I do like that he's older than Demetrius. *snickers* Luvs that boy. Anyway, Update soon. I can wait for some mysteries to b solved. *grins*
cutelittle mongoose 2004-11-05 . chapter 5
ah! i'm mad at you! realld really really BAD ending.erg! the next time i see you i'm gona poke you and poke you and poke you till you have a really big brooze!ok.bye.i love you!!
^.^
centi 2004-11-02 . chapter 5
^^ So I saved them all to disk so I can reread them hehe. WRITE MY SIX WRITE MY SIX ;__; Or maybe more of that one with the kid in the mental institution. Meanwhile I'm gonna stuff myself with a dose of the beautiful persephone.
Tally 2004-11-02 . chapter 5
I'm so glad you updated! It's been so long! I really liked this chapter. We got to know a little bit more about Persephone and about Demetrius. I can't wait to find out who that strange guy is! Persephone sure seemed to like him. Oh, will Demetrius have competition? I can't wait to see! Update again soon!
Staris 2004-11-01 . chapter 5
ah wonderful chapter!! oh the suspence! lol bwahaha please update soon!! i really really really love this series!! and persephone can't be that old... Lucien stop lying lol hahah oh well he probably is... *sigh* whatever! haha anyways loved it!!
afk (lazy) 2004-11-01 . chapter 5
tell me this isn't the end...*growl* update!
Tally 2004-09-13 . chapter 4
I REALLY REALLY REALLY love your story! It has exactly what I want n a vampire fic! I absolutely adore dominating vampires who like to rape boys HAHAHAHAHA! And you know what I like best of all? When Persephone wears a dress! That's SO hot! I'd like to see how he does in his french and piano lessons, too. And it would be so so so hot if Lucian woul put him in lingerie! Or at least make him wear womens' underwear. I'm starting to drool just thinking about it...
I just want you to know that I think it's great how worldly you are. You know (if not fluently, then almost fluently) Portuguese, French, probably Spanish, and did I see a little Italian in Alegria? Plus you get extra cool points for liking the Cirque du Soleil. :) Please write the next chapter soon! And make it as long as you can! I want to savor everything. You've GOT to have time to write! No one's THAT busy! You could, like, not watch that econd episode of Friends or something. Oh, I'm sorry, that's mean. I shouldn't be telling you what to do. You're the author, you can do what you want. Just don't leave us hangin' alright? I'm sure there are a lot of people who follow your fics but don't review, so don't let them down! Remember: the faster you type, the faster you'll get carpal tunnel! So get those fingers moving!
Btw, as for your question about who Persephone should end up with, I think it should be Demetrius. Happy endings are nice. Oh, and I really don't like that girl, what's-her-face. Off with her head! But don't make her boyfriend sad. I don't like when the good people are sad. Wel, happy writing!
Painted Desert 2004-09-08 . chapter 4
This is a review for both the last two chapters. I loved them both and although they are kind of confusing I think things are slowly being cleared up. I'm excited for more. I know you're busy but I hope you don't take TOO long to update.
Staris 2004-09-07 . chapter 4
wow! this is soo weird i was re reading Act one last night lol anyways great chapter!! poor persephone... honeslty that poor boy has a rough life... Can't you make Lucien a little bit warm and fuzzy without the fear of him turning all sadistic on us?? ^.^;; haha jk jk anyways update soon!!
Staris 2004-09-07 . chapter 4
wow! this is soo weird i was re reading Act one last night lol anyways great chapter!! poor persephone... honeslty that poor boy has a rough life... Can't you make Lucien a little bit warm and fuzzy without the fear of him turning all sadistic on us?? ^.^;; haha jk jk anyways update soon!!
Hopes Forgotten 2004-09-06 . chapter 4
Ohh, two updates in one day. That's like wow =) Heh, poor poor Persephone =/
Painted Desert 2004-09-03 . chapter 1
YOU UPDATED! I will review that chapter but I have to read it when I get home!! I'm so excited! WOOT WOOT!
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