Is this where the BIG change came in? I love the poem.

M, sad. I have a few friends like that. I probably won't see them again either. Smoothly done.

Do you know what's really scary?
I have a poem almost exactly like this.
...
yours is better though...

really cool, although sad in a way. ur a very good writer.

It gives off a mystirious vibe to me...
Nice work. I like it.

Another wonderful job. This reminds me of an old friend of mine for some weird reason... But THUMBS UP! P

Wonderfully emotional and imapactive.
You have a very distinct talent.
Very Well Done,
KEEP WRITING!
F.C

GREAT poem...I liked it alot! Great job!

A Wonderful piece. The number of ways you descibe how this person's essence is now within you is great. Very real emotions.
-orph
p.s. thanx for your review of 'little candle'. You seriously made my day.

This is beautiful! Thank you for all your compliments, from one writer to another, your writing is also deep and thoughtful, I am more than happy to include you in my book! I wish I could do more, I do really appreciate all your reviews. Do write!

I like the lines "You are the shards of glass/that are imbedded into my soul." It's so permanent and painful. GJ.

As always, your poems make me go 'wow'. I like the part 'I can't bleed you out, ever' it's just... beautiful and sad.