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Eclipse
teh tarik
2004-07-08 . chapter 1
This is a sweet and inspiring haiku. I love the way you use the eclipse as a moral lesson to learnt. The last line spoke of great perseverance and optimism.
wee-rebz
2004-07-07 . chapter 1
aww, this is nice...a wee reminder that there's always hope. thanks for that :o)
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