this one's really good...i could've sworn i reviewed it cuz i've read all of your stuff. ha thanks fer the reviews by the way! ^_^some kind of possession came over me and i randomly started putting up some super old poems of mine. haha. and the winstonsalem one is about when we were leavin emerald isle and right after mom found out about us in topsail.haha.remember being all squashed up in the back? and alex sleepin in his lap? ahaha. "dad can i get some chips?" NO! miss u!

Beautiful and VERY true poem!

Nice poem, very truthful about peoples trying to be like other and lying about something not even true about their life. Like... a kids that love China and want to live there, but he lying and say that he's from that country and it's his homeland. Other might believe him, some maybe not. But hey, good poem ^_^ Ja ne.

Wow, you wrote that better that better than I wrote my poem "Me"! Of course, I guess I could always write a better version of it! ^_^ That was really good! Couldn'ta put it better myself! Great job! ^_^

Hello, this is a really good poem. you must care alot about this person, its good to have people like you as friends

I can relate and I'm sure one of my class mates can... Great poem

Damn man! You got me there! Cause I sort of could relate to it... my life that is. You did again! Good job!