dude... i llovee this poem. when i first read it (like two years ago) it totally inspired some writing. amazing my friend...absolutely amazing

This is a cool poem. It gets you thinking. Thanks for the review.

this is great 'lintu'. i've written some poems if ya want 2 check em out. and read my bio... :D we miss you so much! boo hoo! :.(

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Hey-ya. Sorry this took so long. Thanks for reviewing... it means a lot. As for this. Never have I seen such work. Glich and you are both awesome writers! I admit... I never liked poetry... but yout two... just rock. Oh wow. I'm gonna read some more.

Wow, what imagery! Truly a great poem! ^_^ Liked it lots! Yep! Very cool how you write poems! Can't wait to read the next one!

I really like this poem. Good job on the words and rhyming!

nicely written. I've really enjoyed reading your poems.

Love it. You are now one of my favourite authors.

Wow! Awesome poem, I love the imagery and the message of this work. Thank you for writing such a good poem!

Very well written and the words flow nicely. I liked the way you described her run and her fight!
Keep writing!