weird... i don't really know how 2 discribe this story, or if its possible to define it. you feel connected to matthew and faye, cos the represent all the things you whish you were, but never will be, they represent the childhood, and innocence u never had, then theirs keenan and audrey you hate cos their greed and lust will undoubly shatter the wonderful world matt and faye live in, but at the smae time you feel their lust as strong as they do... arg confusing, i know, but i very much loved it. please update, and don't let it become 2 unpredictable.

Keep going. This is my favourite after Belmont. Thank you.

Dun dun dun... Indeed I think the same of Faye often (that she's somewhat inept) but then, knowing her personality from the past chapters it's also understandable. My own social ineptitude has progressed from that level, but not by far...

Yay! I love Matthew! *Hugs Matthew* *hugs you too for creating Matthew* Keenan and Audrey are interesting, and Faye's just funny! Please update very soon. or I shall be forced to harrass you until you do!

ooh please go on! i'm so curious now! the story sounds a bit liek cruel intentions to me lol .

Hello! This is the person who randomly greeted you on AIM the other day... Anyways, Faye does kind of seem like Clara from house of Spirits... That's an amazing book... Um, I checked and I don't think chocolate chip cookies can get to Belgium without getting stale... And I was going to send you some... Anyways, I love the stories with a passion I usually reserve for butterfingers *Has now read them all* and I think I'm going to do a book report on 'Belmont' I can't wait to see my English teachers face when I explain the plot...

Brilliant chapter, love.

Keenan and Aubrey make an odd duo, but interesting all the same.

This story is beautiful. It owns that tranquil, yet troubled quality. That's how it feels to me.

I was bored and thought I would read another one of your stories. It's lovely.

I'm so pleased that you are continueing with this story -- it's one of my personal favorites. The characters are so interesting, and you can't help but love them all.

I must also thank you for adding more chapters to this story, becase you have inspired me to keep working on mine. Insperation is so hard to come across these days :/

Ever since I first read the beginning chapter to this story, I was hooked. Now, at chapter four, I still find myself wanting more ^.^And about writer's block, I must say that I'm 100% with you on that. I am experiencing a horrid case of it, myself :/ Your storys inspire me to write, however, and I want to thank you for that very much! It's hard to find anything that catches my short, strange attention span these days, and your writing has definately caught it this time :)

I never thought Matthew and Faye would put up with Keenan and Aubrey! I liked that chapter though. I have no idea what you're thinking with this story and it's fun.

-Cat

Beauty.

Very good so far, just wanted to comment before I forget to: Faye reminds me much of the character Clara in The House of the Spirits (Isabel Allende). Very good book, you might like it. Best of luck to you. Cheers!