aww this was so cute!!

sweet :)

Great way to twist a tale. Loved it!

That was so cute! I think I liked the garden scene best. A great version of an old tale. Good work. :)

Oh i loved it!
nice job.

Oy! So beautiful! I love fairy tale adaptations, they're a hobby, and this is so wispy, ethereal, delicate. I really enjoyed the way you managed to make your characters real, despite the length of the story. Your writing is sophisticated, and I am so thankful that you did not resort to saccarine cliches. It is always a pleasure to read something uplifting and well written, so thanks for both. I sincerely hope you keep writing, wonderful, wonderful work.
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Cool, great job.

Loved it! Well-written, with good detail. I've seen a ton of Cinderella stories, but this would have to be the best. Good use of dialog, and introduction of characters. Great job. ^^