That made me smile, seeing myself in that girl perhaps... waiting for her love when he's there all along. An often used idea, but a good one, and you did a wonderful job to create beauty in this piece. ~wandering fire

Aww! Is that the end?? I think it's really sweet! Is he her soul mate?? That was so adorable!! i really enjoyed it! You're a great author! keep writing!

aw, this story is really cute, i like that she got exactly what she was hoping for even thought she didn't know it. update soon.