OH, I REALLY LIKE! It's very amusing... I don't have time to spell out to you right now the few grammatical and spelling errors I saw while reading your piece, but maybe I can do that later...hopefully. God Bless and penguins still rock!

I like the story so far! Anything to do with a princess and i'm interested!

Looks like it will be a great story. One suggestion, start with a hook, it is important to show how self centered the Princess is but her looking in the mirror might be moved to a later paragraph :)
Otherwise the plot looks like it will be a fun read!