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| i am a banana 2006-05-27 ch 1,  | abuseyou're teh first person i knwo who wrote bout this. awesome! i like the fact that it doesn't rhyme. it's different. i got a new chapter to nightmares. |
| braindead1345 2006-04-21 ch 1, | abuseVery pretty, frgile. |
| celentia 2005-06-13 ch 1, anon. | abusei like this one to, it's sort of peaceful, if you know what i mean. lovely imagery! thanks for reveiwing my story, but i cant do description. i always try but then i cant get the story to work, because it dosen't flow. im going to see if i can put more desription in it but i will probly turn out crap!ive uploaded the next chapter, if you want to check that out, but it's really fast. clear horizens, celentia |
| Mercutio's Heir 2005-03-06 ch 1, | abuseSounds like a retreat I go to for church...wonderful. Short, sweet, to the point, and still poetic. "Children and Angels alike"...it's just...striking. And awesome. Great job. |
| Manuel Fajar 2004-11-06 ch 1, | abuseEchoes in the throat when read, Echoes in the heart when felt— Beautiful, short and wonderful. m |
| Arsenic336 2004-09-18 ch 1, | abuseWoah this is beautiful. So peaceful. Very nice. |
| Toph Gonzalez 2004-09-10 ch 1, | abuseImpressive! What a serene image this brings to mind and I especially like the alliterations. I see bright horizons ahead... You should check out (and review) my poems "A Complaint to God" and "God's Reply to the Complaint" it also revolves around the theme of hope... By the way, I did not get your review of my poem "Fear". |
| RandomOreo 2004-08-23 ch 1, | abusegreat imagry! ~oreo Ps. I'll read your stuff -looks at profile- see i will return the R&R favor! -wink- even though i am evil! Bwahahahaa... -cough- I'm okay... |
| FilledeCali89 2004-08-11 ch 1, | abusebeautiful imagery~! Thanks for the reviews, and maybe someday I'll post my story...I might post the prologue tonight. |
| karmakaze 2004-07-22 ch 1, | abuseThat does sound like a beautiful place. Great job. |
| Violet Kitsune 2004-07-17 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was so beautiful. I could picture it in my mind. Your poetic description is awsome, keep writing!! |
| singingspeechless 2004-07-12 ch 1, | abusenice use of imagery. good job. i felt like i was there. |
| DARK 2004-07-11 ch 1, anon. | abusehey umm...great work cant wait for another... |
| Yuki-Sama 2004-07-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery nice; takes a tingling venture up my spine ^.~ nice work. And hey-thanks for replying on my- work ::gag:: I don't care if you are thirteen- I consider you of wide talent. -Yuki |
| Teperehmi 2004-07-09 ch 1, | abuseReminds me of camping trips. It's good. Thanx for reviewing mine. (: |