you're teh first person i knwo who wrote bout this. awesome! i like the fact that it doesn't rhyme. it's different. i got a new chapter to nightmares.

Very pretty, frgile.

i like this one to, it's sort of peaceful, if you know what i mean. lovely imagery!

thanks for reveiwing my story, but i cant do description. i always try but then i cant get the story to work, because it dosen't flow. im going to see if i can put more desription in it but i will probly turn out crap!ive uploaded the next chapter, if you want to check that out, but it's really fast.

clear horizens, celentia

Sounds like a retreat I go to for church...wonderful. Short, sweet, to the point, and still poetic. "Children and Angels alike"...it's just...striking. And awesome. Great job.

Echoes in the throat when read,
Echoes in the heart when felt—
Beautiful, short and wonderful. m

Woah this is beautiful. So peaceful. Very nice.

Impressive! What a serene image this brings to mind and I especially like the alliterations. I see bright horizons ahead...
You should check out (and review) my poems "A Complaint to God" and "God's Reply to the Complaint" it also revolves around the theme of hope...
By the way, I did not get your review of my poem "Fear".

great imagry!
~oreo
Ps. I'll read your stuff -looks at profile- see i will return the R&R favor! -wink- even though i am evil! Bwahahahaa... -cough- I'm okay...

beautiful imagery~! Thanks for the reviews, and maybe someday I'll post my story...I might post the prologue tonight.

That does sound like a beautiful place. Great job.

Wow, that was so beautiful. I could picture it in my mind. Your poetic description is awsome, keep writing!!

nice use of imagery. good job. i felt like i was there.

hey umm...great work cant wait for another...

Very nice; takes a tingling venture up my spine ^.~ nice work. And hey-thanks for replying on my- work ::gag:: I don't care if you are thirteen- I consider you of wide talent.
-Yuki

Reminds me of camping trips. It's good.
Thanx for reviewing mine. (: