This story has spiked my interest very much. Hopefully you'll give unknown girl a name soon. And its cute how lost and confused she is. Heck I'm a little confused too. Anyways plz update soon!

ooh wow...this is great...i love it. its...GREAT!! *laughs falling on the floor off her chair* please continue...i think i'm hyper

heya!great story..where your from? i noticed your english isnt the best, there are a few things you should try and fix :)
alone,not a lone :)
and "make sence" not since,since means something else,dunno how i should explain it though :P,waiting for more chappies,
Avi

Ow didn't mean to hurt you *pets your back* Let me make it up to you... *brings you icecream gets greedy and makes a run with your icecream* ^_^"
Anyroad that was another great chap plz keep going :-p

sorry i was late in FBing, I just read this. IT was a good chapter. I'm glad to see that you are writing again! ;):)

love this story hehe, that was really funny ^_^ lotsa suspense! I was really excited when i saw your update! hehe dont make me wait that long again! :( update soon and all that!

*chuckles* i like this. great situation you've put Angelica in, lol. so, ya, now i must tell you... UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE! ^_^

YO! Let me ask you this... How soon can you update this fic huh?! *pushes you toward the computer table*

this is very interisting so far. very good story, with a great potential. update soon ^_^

I knew this story was going to be good! hehe, its going great thus far. the not named yet girl is really funny and gives a good edge to the story! lovin it so far, keep it going!

A pretty good story. Update soon!
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P.S. I would greatly appreciate it if you read and reviewed some of my work. You don't have to. I am merely asking. Thank you!

i'm liking this. please continue.

Thanks your the birthday wishs. Nice Job, I like this story. His daughter seems a little mean! Update soon. Your a really good writer.
Sam

Pretty good so far. You might want to reupload the second chapter and get rid of the huge space at the bottom, though. Overall, good work.

Hey K. I really like this story. keep it up. It's very interesting!