i didnt find this that funny, but funny none the less. but dont pay me any mind. i have a twisted sense of humour as it is. hehe. off to read more of your work...keep writing...

~dare to dream~

This one is a little edgy. Is that what you wanted? The title "Family" gave it an interesting twist. Is this a statment of family relations? Probably more often than not. The dialogue is very good and very effective. Definitely sounds realistic. My favorite line is: "unkempt, unorganized and unintention appeal." This definite makes the reader grasp a sense of the man. The words are specific but lyrical. Nice.

*grins* Go on then, you've earned the right to be arrogant (everyone's favorite comedian indeed). But as they say, you've still got to keep it. ^.~

OMG! This is hilarious! You must read my play, titled, originally, A PLAY. EEK! I loves plays. Write more!