|Reviews for Okay|
| PaganScribe 7/27/04 . chapter 1
Profound and simple.
thanks for my reviews i guess you owe some more? ;)
| unjaundiced 7/16/04 . chapter 1
simple and wonderful. i don't know what else to say.
| simpleplan13 7/8/04 . chapter 1
definatelly cool... I can relate
| Zik 7/8/04 . chapter 1
I like it. It's a bit sad, but there's that little glimmer of hope in the last line.
| ac 7/8/04 . chapter 1
Lol I don't like haikus because they are short but if you could use a series of haikus and make a longer poem it would be perfect. Lol.
| empty account 7/7/04 . chapter 1
Great seventeen syllable message! Most people have a hard time putting real meaning in their Haiku but not you.