Profound and simple.
thanks for my reviews i guess you owe some more? ;)

simple and wonderful. i don't know what else to say.

definatelly cool... I can relate

I like it. It's a bit sad, but there's that little glimmer of hope in the last line.

Lol I don't like haikus because they are short but if you could use a series of haikus and make a longer poem it would be perfect. Lol.
Luv ya!
Allie

Great seventeen syllable message! Most people have a hard time putting real meaning in their Haiku but not you.