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| Writing4Eternity 2006-08-23 ch 6,  | abuseOk... I graduated High School in 2004 so I had to read this. |
| Sophie Ulquiorra Allen 2005-11-25 ch 6, | abuseWoo. Very cool, and completely freaky. So, is this the Robert you discussed in your poetry with the scab shirt? Cute story, and also quite funny. You had me laughing. The last part was pretty interesting, I like the reference made to Waterloo. Anywayz, do continue. |
| . 2005-07-03 ch 6, anon. | abuseHeh- well this is certainly unrealistic. A teacher would never accept an offer like that from a student...I can assure you AND especially if he is married. You should be careful as to what you say--you never know who could be reading this. Ciao. |
| Luv2write4u13 2004-07-20 ch 6, | abuseSorry I took so long to update but this was great. One of the best chapters you have ever written to me! ^_^ |
| Coral Chimera 2004-07-14 ch 6, | abuseI had not an idea that a little dare could get millions of thoughts spinning in Mr Darcy's mind. Nice work- typographical errors again but definitely understandable. You gripped the emotions and complications well, hats off for that! |
| Sharap'n 2004-07-12 ch 5, | abuseI KNEW IT! IT ALL FITS TOGETHER! Abby knowing his number, being so anxious about the date, and now this! Her friends must be BLIND AS BATS! Argh, can't type, peanut butter getting confused with all the clay on my hands... in case you were wondering, I'm eating peanut butter while making a snake. It's gonna be great. Anywho, I anxiously await the next chapter! |
| Coral Chimera 2004-07-12 ch 5, | abuseShort. Why did Abi storm out?? Update! |
| Luv2write4u13 2004-07-12 ch 5, | abuseI know what's wrong with Abigail since I read your story. She's mad because she's in love with Mr Darcy! That was really good, update soon! |
| Coral Chimera 2004-07-12 ch 4, | abuseSorry for neglecting this, but I'm back with my two cents! I found Ch 3 really really funny and Ch 4 pretty interesting. Things are bound to get weird for Rochelle and Mr D when school resumes on Monday! :S It'll take a while for Rol to get over it..but bring in some REAL GUYS, REAL SOON! Ah! Well anyways a very very entertaining read. Update soon! |
| Sharap'n 2004-07-12 ch 4, | abuseUrgh! He's OLD! Can not WAIT to see the next chapter. |
| Luv2write4u13 2004-07-11 ch 4, | abuseThat was so good. Pleez check out my story about the girl and her mother and pleez tell me if you think it's good. |
| Luv2write4u13 2004-07-11 ch 3, | abuseThat was really good! Poor Rochelle, the poor poor girl. I feel so bad for her right now. She should have Joh call her during the movie or leave her a text message saying that Johanna needed her pronto so that Rochelle could leave but I'm sure that would crush Mr Darcy, the poor man. |
| Luv2write4u13 2004-07-11 ch 2, | abuseThe poor girl. So do you just write the stories and use the same characters but different storylines? I don't know how those other two girls could like Mr Darcy cuz he's annoying. |
| Sharap'n 2004-07-10 ch 3, | abuseAnother great chapter! I like how he likes her but she doesn't like him, if ya get my drift. Anywho, update SOON, or I will DIE. |
| SweetHebe 2004-07-09 ch 2, | abuseLOL Funny story. |