its a nice story though i wish it had been longer

nice

i'm so glad everything worked out in the end- i'd begun to think she was doomed..

I loved this story. It just shows that things DO work out in the end. And everything starts to make sense too. Great story! = D

wow...once you get lucky...everything just makes sense huh?:D that was cool...*i can't stop smiling*

the tie-ing up of the coincidences are really good. goes to show how destiny works. i can totally relate with her bad lucks, i hope my MARK shows up ASAP! :)

btw, i loved it when you metioned lex :D

I like how everything came together. It was really cute.

~tickles!`

Great job with the story story! I love it. This is definitely something I could read over and over again.

I really enjoyed reading this. Very entertaining. I like how you work your way through the coincidences. Cool:D

This is really good so far. I'm going to finish reading it later on, but its really good!

i know exactly how Grace feels. exactly. now, why can't i meet a mark?

wounderful story, i love your stuff.

I really love that story. I've read it like... five times, and I think that some of us girls could probably relate. It's a really great story and I love the coincidences at the end? When there's all the things about this one guy that can relate back to when she didn't have the boy next door, the porche thing, the ad she woke up to and the elevator. It's really, sweet!

Lol! hhehehehee, i really like this story of urs - kills all the stereotypes and first, and joins them all together at the end! keep up the good work!! =)

Very good! I like it a lot. This is something I could read over and over and over and over and over and over and over again.

Very good! I like it a lot. This is something I could read over and over and over and over and over and over and over again.