Awesome. Cool. You should make a sequel (or a prequel) to this explaining what happened with Devin's marriage and. This could be a very compelling dramatic novel! Write more.

A short story with a twist. Nice. ^^Keep Writin'^^
~ Alexz Lynn

YAY! One of those great twist in the tail stories!
~Z~

Oh, intense! Oh la la! ^_~ It was powerful and good, with a happy ending. Now I must make one potent and dark, with a terrible, horrible, gruesome, tearful, tragic, terrifying, loathsome ending! HAHAHAHAHA!! J/k... I just like being weird. Still, methinks I like the point of your story.