|Reviews for Soldiers|
| Eyes Unclouded 8/13/04 . chapter 1
I also have to agree with the other reviewers. I loved the lines "I never knew that gloom/could shine so brightly." I think they reflect the nature of the poem, too. Despite the dark atmosphere, the writing is brilliant (read: shines). Loved it!
| catseyeview 7/29/04 . chapter 1
I have to agree with another reviewer, the line, "I never knew that gloom could shine so brightly," is strangely powerful. I love this line.
| CentauriSk 7/18/04 . chapter 1
Amazing! You are a very talented poet!
My favorite lines:
"I never knew that gloom
could shine so brightly..."
| teh tarik 7/10/04 . chapter 1
I love the imagery of this poem. And I love the way you use oxymorons so smoothly and perfectly fitted into the poem.
| justaforgottenface37 7/8/04 . chapter 1
that's really good.. your sense of wording is great, and i love the descriptions you give...
- Addison Spear (justaforgottenface37)