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Eyes Unclouded 8/13/04 . chapter 1I also have to agree with the other reviewers. I loved the lines "I never knew that gloom/could shine so brightly." I think they reflect the nature of the poem, too. Despite the dark atmosphere, the writing is brilliant (read: shines). Loved it! |
catseyeview 7/29/04 . chapter 1I have to agree with another reviewer, the line, "I never knew that gloom could shine so brightly," is strangely powerful. I love this line. |
CentauriSk 7/18/04 . chapter 1Amazing! You are a very talented poet! My favorite lines: "I never knew that gloom could shine so brightly..." |
teh tarik 7/10/04 . chapter 1I love the imagery of this poem. And I love the way you use oxymorons so smoothly and perfectly fitted into the poem. |
justaforgottenface37 7/8/04 . chapter 1that's really good.. your sense of wording is great, and i love the descriptions you give... Great job - Addison Spear (justaforgottenface37) |