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| singingspeechless 2004-07-12 ch 1,   | great job. short but sweet and to the point. |
| E. Hisifithith 2004-07-08 ch 1, | you did a really great job rhyming!! seriously, good rhyme is hard to come across these days... you might want to try spell check because there are a lot of typos... and maybe you could make line 8 and line 9 into just one line... i think it would look better that way. other than that, this is a great poem with a great message!! i get criticized and jugded all the time so i can relate. KEEP UP THE WONDERFUL WORK!! E. Hisifithith |