great job. short but sweet and to the point.

you did a really great job rhyming!! seriously, good rhyme is hard to come across these days... you might want to try spell check because there are a lot of typos... and maybe you could make line 8 and line 9 into just one line... i think it would look better that way. other than that, this is a great poem with a great message!! i get criticized and jugded all the time so i can relate.
KEEP UP THE WONDERFUL WORK!!
E. Hisifithith