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Reviews For: Flat Line
Nonymous 2004-08-03 . chapter 1
i am so sorry for not reviewing this!
TipZy Tamagotchi 2004-07-11 . chapter 1
I read this because a friend showed me to it. It's good, but uh. It made me laugh so much, I'm really sorry. My friend has it as her MSN name, and it's like this "I'm sorry, sir, she's in a comma." "A comma? No! Not a comma!" "I'm afraid so, sir. A comma." Just don't try to mix up your punctuation with your comas and you'll be fine. ^^; Great story though, sad. >
iama 2004-07-11 . chapter 1
Not as depressing but it's good enough
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