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| Getuie 2004-07-12 ch 2,  | abuseThe change in format really does help to break the flow... to let a reader pause and really take in what's being said |
| Getuie 2004-07-12 ch 1, | abuseWhat a facinating comparison! To compare ones inability to accurately write and portray nature in its brilliance to natures inability to portray the glory of God. Well done! |
| Culurrien 2004-07-10 ch 2, | abuseYes, it's so true... More than a thousand words won't say what His perfect and unchanging love is like. Our mortal words are bound to our genetic law... Which can ultimately be broken, and we come to the place where we speak no words at all and the heart exchanges our intimate love for The Father. Both versions of this poem were excellent, but I did enjoy the second one better.The arrangement of it was wonderful, and I really enjoyed this piece. |