I'M ADDING THIS TO MY FAVES LIST! AWESOMENESS TO THE FIFTY SEVENTH DEGREE!

That was really nice. I don't know what will happen to me when I die.

*clap clap clap clap clap* its VERY good! and it rhymes too! it mustve taken you ahwile to do this! its very god for your first story! o, and welcome to fictionpress!
congrats and hope you enjoy,
MDND